Alice Fordham
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COLLECTIVE CREATIVITY IS A seductive concept. If one imagination can produce rewarding art, what if several creative brains worked together? And the internet seems the ideal place for such collaborations.
One person could begin a novel, and another could move the storyline along. Careful types could take a fine-tooth comb to the grammar and spelling, as well as the imagery and language. Public spirited editors might eliminate mindless vandalism or obscenity, and the finished book would be greater than the sum of its parts.
Several internet phenomena thrive on collective knowledge, notably the online encyclopaedia Wikipe-dia, where thousands of people write and edit the site. The idea of creativity being harnessed with the same success is tempting.
Yet, although fiction abounds on the internet, no story had been written by the online masses until some bright sparks at Penguin teamed up with new media specialists at De Montford University, Leicester, to begin a brave experiment. Harnessing the technology that allows Wiki-pedia to be written and edited, they launched a wikinovel last month, titled A Million Penguins. Anyone could contribute and anyone could change it — this was group writing without limits. The project remained online for several weeks, and is now there in its completed form at amillionpenguins.com/wiki.
The technical director, Jeremy Ettinghauser, was first to spy this new potential. “It seemed like a good idea,” he says, “because there is a huge amount of talk about groups and committees on the internet, and we wanted to see if we could apply this group use of ideas an technology to a novel. We also wanted to create a space for people to talk about writing together.” He was careful not to expect too much: “The quality is not up to me. It is up to the people writing it.” He admits, however, that he is rarely impressed by fiction on the net.
John Sutherland, Emeritus Professor of English Literature at University College London, sounds a more cynical note, saying that collaborative fiction has been tried before and “it never works”. Hegives the example of The Detection Club, a group of mystery writers including Dorothy L. Sayers and Agatha Christie, all of whom achieved more with individual than collaborative works. There was also a 1960s novel, Naked Came the Stranger, an attempt by several writers of the day to prove that any rubbish could sell provided it had plenty of sex scenes. It attracted some attention as a curio, but had no lasting success.
Whatever their expectations, everyone must have been surprised by the response to the wikinovel, which drew nearly 1,500 contributors. But result is a vast, sprawling, surreal read. At one point the story split into “Novel A” and “Novel B” and the site has links to alternative endings. Characters and storylines appear and disappear in a sometimes incomprehensible mass of writing.
There has been the recurring appearance of a writer intent on including bananas; at one stage Fred, a mouse is described thus: “Fred wasn’t sure what he was talking about. The mention of bananas had made him hungry. He felt like a banana, or a banana split, or maybe a banana smoothie — or perhaps, at a stretch, banana pie. It was such a versatile fruit! He did a little dance — spelling the word ‘banana’ out with his body — ‘B-A-N-A-N-A’!”
Kate Pullinger, a novelist and creative writing teacher who worked on the project, says that it is ground-breaking: “It’s the first time that I have come across a collaborative writing project open to the whole world.”
But is it any good? Scott Pack, the former Waterstone’s executive who runs The Friday Project, an internet publishing company, now bringing out its first novel, says: “My honest feeling is that that it is very unlikely to have any value as a book. Not in a snobby way — but I think it’s unlikely that people will want to read it.”
It is hard to disagree. Even an enthusiastic Penguin editor writes: “I find I can read in about ten-minute stints, which I reckon is pretty good considering what it's like.”
Novels do not necessarily flourish in the limitless possibilities of the net. Imagination needs discipline, boundaries and structure. In the wikinovel many imaginations were working at once, but not together. There are hundreds of good ideas and characters, but no coherence. Because anyone could contribute as much or as little as they wanted, too many added a little without thought for the whole.
More structured uses of the internet can work rather better, in particular ones where writers post early versions of their work to get feedback from experts and the masses. Charles Leadbeater, an author who specialises in studying innovation, posted his latest book, We-think, online, allowing readers to make changes and additions. On a site called youwriteon.com, supported by the Arts Council, first chapters are rated by readers. A professional criticises the top five each month, and once a year, the two most popular are published.
But the net’s complex networks of people with overlapping interests have revolutionised the way that we think, read and write. There is nothing written that people will not comment on, alter, produce their own versions of, write sequels to — or even attempt to subvert with banana themes. Such a proliferation of creativity may be weird sometimes, but it can only be good and exciting, too.
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It would be better for a single man to have a good wife than a good fortune. So, having only a good fortune, that man needs to share it with a good wife. Sometimes men's and women's stories are those of good couples.
Paolo Mazzarello, Genoa, Italy
The pity of the matter was that a single man of good fortune had been raised from the cradle to believe that all women desired a husband. And Miss Elizabeth Bennet was most certainly not one of those women.
Carol Bevitt, Nottingham, UK
I was halfway through my fifth decade when I first read these words. I had considered myself open-minded, product of a post-feminist milieu, an early and small example of a post-feminist milieu admittedly, composed of the few people I bothered listening to and the few people who bothered talking to me. Now I see that my prejudices just lie deeper entrenched, battlemented about with self justificatory buttresses of behaviour which render them all but inaccessible. I think it was when we discussed Frankenstein for the first time that I had an inkling that something was rotten in the state of my literary appreciation. I just didn't 'get' it and it bothered me. I haven't had so much trouble reading a book since, well, let's not speak ill of the dead on the page, but certainly Frankenstein was hard to read and I said so. Her words hit hard; "if you avoid the works of half the worlds great writers because they are about relationships rather than testosterone, don't ask for sympathy."
Kidd Garrett, Bristol, UK
First define "Good Fortune" then perhaps, we may attempt to open the doors of prospects and projects.
wannabe, Edinburgh, Midlothian
Clearly this was the sentiment of Mrs Bennet, as she harangued her poor husband with her incessant chatter. A truth universally acknowledged! What did Miss Elizabeth Bennet care about a truth universally acknowledged! Surely she was her own person, a modern woman? She remembered her manners and said nothing; she merely pursed her lips in that annoying little way she had. Inwardly however, she fumed, she boiled. Besides, this maxim, for want of a less polite word, smacked of greed, covetousness and vanity. Whatever happened to virtue those fine qualities so nobly exemplified by the Ancient Romans honour, dignity, pride, honesty, integrity? Now mama was bullying poor papa into visiting this single man with fortune. Miss Elizabeth Bennet had heard enough. As quietly as she could, she rose from her chair, crossed the room and closed the door not with a slam but just sharply enough to set the ornaments on the mantelpiece aquiver.
Jean Marshall, Bushey, Hertfordshire
It is a lie that man needs a wife to be happy that is perpetuated and sustained by a sisterhood of women that need a man's care and protection to validate their existence. This has always been so and will continue for all the days of human survival.
susan james, benfleet, esssex. uk
Unless of course he is want of a husband.
Markiavelli, Wakefield, West Yorkshire
Somewhat less understood are the wants of the fortune. To be hoarded, perhaps, or grandly paraded. Maybe fortunes are also in want of a partner, and in this way seek to be spent; to be moved out of the public eye. Men, it is known, come to resemble their money.
Nick Oakden, Nottingham, UK
'However little known the feelings or views of such a man may be on hist first entering a neighbourhood, this truth is so well fixed in the minds of the surrounding families, that he is considered as the rightful property of some one or other of their daughters.'
Artemisia, London,
The reason this is so, a truth less often acknowledged, is that a man will live far longer with a wife to tend to his needs. Conversely, the wife will die before her time, worn down with cooking, cleaning, child-brearing, bed-warming, and ego-stroking. Only the inducement of a good fortune would persuade any woman of sense to entertain the thought of matrimony.
carol bird, Cheltenham, uk
For it is well known by all that a man finds the burden of a good fortune far too heavy to bear and must perforce shed this as soon as possible on the pursuits of happiness that present themselves naturally to him; to wit, carousing at hostelries, following the fortunes of the horses at the races and, naturally, drawing to him the most amenable of local beauties. However, a wife will take upon her slender shoulders the onerous task of dealing with this fortune by attiring herself, her home and her subsequent children in the manner to which she has determined to be accustomed. Thus is the ideal partnership formed.
Marilyn Sands, Nottingham, UK
Unfortunately for Miss Elizabeth Bennet, this did not hold good in the case of Mr Darcy, for Mr Darcys interests lay elsewhere. Had Miss Bennet not been born one of the fairer sex, she may have stood a chance. But she had, and therefore she did not.
Jay Mandal, Camberley,
Admittedly, as the story begins, Fitzwilliam Darcy, the future owner of a very good fortune indeed, is merely of an age to require the frequent attention of his nurse, being within two weeks of his first birthday, and his potential bride, Miss Elizabeth Bennett, has yet to be born. Therefore this volume will describe only their youthful escapades. Readers wishing to know the result of their eventual meeting will be obliged to purchase the forthcoming second volume!
Sharon Sibley, Ruislip, Middx,
This isn't about Pride and Prejudice - definitely relevant to the article though:
It might be worth checking out a site called www.scriblist.com. They've taken the collaborative writing idea but extended it so that each author writes one chapter at a time as part of a competition. The book is half-completed at the moment and it looks like there might be some pretty good stories coming out of it.
Pat Johnson, Plymouth, UK
However a woman, of whatever pecuniary situation, is always assumed to be not merely in want of a husband, but inadequate and miserable without one. The fact that Elizabeth neither wanted nor needed a spouse, and had managed to be of a cheerful disposition and elegant wit without such apendage; was disregarded by all in society. Elizabeth set about proving Society wrong.
Helen Loveday-Sims, Leeds, West Yorks
And a single man in privation of a good fortune must have had a wife.
Simon Stratton, Manchester, UK