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The centre of the pool was a black mirror that reflected an upside-down world. The water might have been knee-deep, or it might have been bottomless, there was no way of knowing, but William had the oddest feeling that if he fell into the water, he would find himself sinking down into that shadowy otherworld.
He did not like this place, not one little bit. It did not want him here, either. He was an intruder, an outsider. If he stayed much longer, he had the feeling he would be made to regret it.
With a huge effort, William threw the trap as hard as he could, out over the ice, towards the dark heart of the pool. There was a loud splash as it hit the water and sank beneath the surface.
He stepped back from the edge and watched the ripples die away. The water became still again. A movement of cold air touched his cheek and he turned quickly, grabbing a branch of the hazel tree to stop himself from falling backwards onto the icy margin of the pool. For a heart-stopping moment, he had the feeling that someone was standing close by. He could not see anything but he felt a presence so strongly, he could almost touch it.
"This will not be forgotten." The whispered words had no more substance than a breath of wind through branches.
William went hot and cold with terror. Forcing his shaking legs to move, he turned and ran.

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This seems like a good book and if I could have one free book of my choice this would be that book.
Wesley Griffiths, Hartland,
Based on this extract I would buy this book for me (age 26) not the kids!
Emma, Cambridge,
I liked the mystery in this piece. The chill of the words spoken working well with the unknown depth of the pool. I want to know how far he managed to run before something struck or drew him back. I would buy this.
Susan , Bovingdon, England
I'd buy it. This book isn't trying to be trendy - it's telling a story, and telling it beautifully. I love the atmosphere. We see the world from William's point of view - a boy in the 13th century. There's a profound sense of history here - not pasted on for effect, but very real. The style seems effortless - it has all the hallmarks of a classic. Great stuff.
Pen, Oxford, England
I love this extract. I'd buy this book for my children.
Susan Spratt, Bedford, England
This is just great - Id love to read more. My favourite of the five - hits the spot for 9-16 year olds both boys and girls- at least I guess so from this extract!
Well done Pat and all the best for the finals!
CHarlotte Gompertz, Mittersill, Austria
I entered this competition and didn't get anywhere - ho hum, will keep on trying. But this is my favourite extract from the shortlist. It's intriguing. It reads like a book and not an attempt at writing a book, if you know what I mean. Good luck Pat, look forward to reading the rest x
Sha, Bournemouth, UK
Love this extract very creepy - I can't wait to find out more about the story and characters. Good luck in the last stages of the comp Pat.
Susan Humphreys, Skelmersdale
Susan Humphreys, Skelmersdale, England