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It’s when we’re level with the tip of the headline I see it. An angel’s head, bobbing by on the water. It’s carved out of wood, not very well, and its hair is painted a strange reddish colour, like you’ve never seen on a real person. I only know it’s an angel’s head cos it’s usually stuck on the front of Andy’s dinghy, which he named Angel. But Andy’d never take it off his boat! He carved that head himself, sitting out on his doorstep, whittling away. Even when the old boys who sit down by the harbour laughed and said it looked more like a pig than an angel, he still kept on at it.
By now Cat’s growling and yowling and leaping about like a crazy thing. It’s all I can do to keep him from climbing up on top of my head. And while I’m fighting him off and staring open-gobbed at the head, which is floating south, headed for Espaňa, I hear a noise like “whump”. Up on the headland. And the old station’s on fire.
Of course, the old station itself ain’t actually burning. It’s the beacon. A great pile of wood and kindling kept dry and stacked up on a raised platform. Cos a fire at Station Point can be seen at Wytham, and then they’ll light their beacon. And then the fires’ll be lit all along the coast until they reach the garrison at Chichester.
But there’s only one reason to light the beacon, and that’s Reavers. Now I know why Cat’s been in such a frenzy, and my hands go sweaty cold. And when we turn the point of the headland I can see the broken boats in the harbour, and the smoke rising from the village. Too much smoke; smoke like houses on fire.
I look from the smoke, to the wreckage of the village boats floating in the water, to the beacon blazing on the headland, and I can hardly believe it. I only went away for a day! How could this have happened in just a day?
More scrips and scraps of wood come floating by, then a fish basket, then a slick hummock of something floating in the water. My breath stops in my mouth till the waves move again and show it’s just clothing, not a body. But it could have been. And they’re probably bodies in the village right now if the Reavers came down with no warning. Oh, don’t let it be Granny, or Andy, or Hetty, or . . .
Don’t let it be anyone, not even Lun.
I turn the tiller and head fast as I can, fast as this stupid little wind will take me, for home.

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Hi I also entered this competition and know what it took to get my entrant ready. The ones they have picked seem ok, well crafted and well written, but it is impossibe to tell from these little extracts! I hope the judges think carefuly about what really engages children when they read. Before Philip Pullman and J K Rowling there was Roald Dahl and he as still as popular today, as he was back then. Good luck to all those who have made it through this little eye of a needle and for those like myself, (how can you pick something of real originality and interest out of over 2,000 entries?), I wish you the best of luck in the future! Maybe we should not take this little setback too seriously!
timothy pond, kingston, London
I hope there isnât going to be a JK Rowling clone produced from this competition. Hopefully, thereâll be someone who has their own style, voice and approach. Like the blurb said âdonât write what you feel is in fashion now because you reckon itâll stand more chance of getting published... Write your story, your way.â If the competition organizers are looking for the above, this competition has some credibility...some integrity. If theyâre looking for a cash cow... a JK Rowling #2 ... thatâd be a bit disappointing. Good luck to all the genuine, non-published, amateur writers.
JH, Kendal,
I Have been following all the extracts as they have appeared but nothing has appeared magical, I can remember the first chapter of Harry Potter it was different and caught your attention, these exracts are well written and interesting but are missing something, i hope the 5 finalists hold some magic, the story needs to be very special to be the next J.K. Rowling. I have put my entry in , but will be patient that soon I will be published even after not reaching the finals in this.
Joanie Spiegel, Worcestershire, England
I think you could be right Charlotte. I've just seen a script writer's blog and he says he's been shortlisted. He found out last week so I can only presume all winners have been notified and are perusing their contract offers.
Oh well, as an entrant I'm disappointed but I wish all those who've made the shortlist the best of luck.
Tracy, England, Cambridge,
My theory is they will announce the 5 finalists this week, then publish an extract each week for the next 5 weeks then announce the winner!
Charlotte Gompertz, Mittersill, Austria
This is the final extract? Does that mean that the winner is going to be announced soon?!
Jack Behan, Derby, UK
This extract is like muddy waters where you can't quite see what is happening. But there is a real sense of a catasrophe that has occured with the Reavers, and the story so far is intriguing. It would be interesting to read where it will all lead - especially with the cat who appears to be disturbed by what it senses. Will this be a marked character in the story? I did think Emily Diamond used the word 'Cos' inappropiately, but that's how she tells it. In all, I think it's worth reading on!
Good Luck Emily.
Joe Thomson-Swift, London, England. UK
Woah, that extract's awesome [=
Ashh Jones, Prenton, Wirral