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1 Watch and learn
It is essential to view as many films as possible, good and bad. The classics are not top of the best-ever lists for nothing, and it is difficult to be original when you don’t know what went before. Working out the structural kink in say Memento or the emotional punch of something like It’s a Wonderful Life cannot fail to inspire your own thought process.
2 Don’t show off
European writers in particular try to make their work look complex and clever. The major skill in screenwriting is making the multifaceted seem simple and accessible. Look at Shrek.
3 Structure
Every script has to have a beginning, middle and an end. Once you remember this you can play with it (see Pulp Fiction, where Tarantino started in the middle, went to the end and then back to the start).
4 The story must have a point
Like it or not, the story has to be about something, with a goal at the end, or it lacks interest (Bertolucci's The Sheltering Sky looked great, but had no real premise). If you can’t describe your story by saying “once upon a time . . .” then maybe there’s no story. A conventional plot will follow someone who has had their status quo interrupted; the drama comes from that person trying to redress the balance.
5 If it’s not 90 minutes then there must be a good reason
Generally speaking, one page of screenplay will take a minute of on-screen time. A movie should be 90 minutes. If your script is over 100 pages there had better be a good reason for it (Ghandi was deserving of three hours; many others are not). Commercially, if you go much above 100 minutes the cinemas will lose one showing a day.
6 Choose your protagonist
Movies should have a protagonist. This can be more than one person (Crash), or even an inanimate object or a place (Fargo). They do not always have to be sympathetic, but they do have to be intriguing.
7 Make an impression
There has to be some suspension of disbelief for a film to work. This is easier for some stories than others but if in doubt, think of Groundhog Day. This was a truly preposterous premise, but logical at every step.
8 Avoid being linear
Movies benefit from having at least two contributory subplots to help vary tone and pace.
9 Be original
These are general guidelines. But you must be true to yourself and your vision. Don’t simply copy others. Good movies stand out because they dare to be different, whether it be the tongue in cheek tone of The Big Lebowski or the reimagining of the Brit gangster flick in Lock Stock and Two Smoking Barrels.
10 You’ve either got it or you haven’t
Talent that is. All the courses and screenwriting gurus in the world will not help you if you don’t have aptitude. There is a knack to writing dialogue that doesn’t feel wooden when spoken. So, happy writing!
Pete Daly reads and develops scripts for a wide range of public funding bodies, producers and distributors. He is contributory editor to The Screenwriter’s Handbook (Macmillan, £16)

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Script should not be above 90 pages ? That's interesting.
It would make for one immediate film. Other advice might say best between 90 and 130 pages.
Damian, Bournemouth, England
Thank you for the advice. Itâs stimulating to have these types of things reiterated. If someone does not understand the seeming lack of complexity of a script like Shrek then they have never attempted to write a screenplay. Itâs witty, compelling, and effortlessly (or so it seems) entertaining. Its use of a somewhat stale oral tradition by parodying, everything from folklore to mission impossible, with out being a spoof shows much greater depth than may be perceived on a shallow interpretation of the plot.
My father noted when I was in High School âRather be thought a fool and remain silent than speak up and remove all doubtâ Some thoughtless comments could gain something from this insightful sentiment.
Quinton Dippenaar, Woking, Surrey
thankyou Ann. SHREK!? MULTIFACETED!? Jessica I'm an experienced screenwriter. Your story has dramatic potential but your main character must have a desire that propels the story and growing obstacles and conflicts that prevent her from reaching this goal. Then a climax that resolves the story and concludes whether your main character acheives her goal or not. To add depth to the story the reasons for her success or failure need to be dramatised.
Tj, London,
You made it sound so simple and easy to understand. Thanks.
Joseph Davids, Southampton, UK
Thanks. This is helpful. Could you do another ten steps in what to do with your 90 pages screenplay after it is written?
Olivia, Boone, NC
This is really useful information, Mr Daly is clearly a genius, more of the same PLEASE!
jamie, seattle, US
Nice tips for writing your own movie;)
Hasan, Bursa,
Mr Daly.I'm Jessica,20-girl from Brazil.I love watching movies and i love writing.So i decided to write a movie myself.I don't have any expectations about seeing my story on the screen.where I live there's no much oportunities for unknow people like me.But movies are so magic!And I love the way they touch you and make you think about yourself, or even make you learn something.And I just wanted to know your opinion about the story I'm writing now.It's all about a girl who had to stop taking college to work and help his famlily with the living expenses.She's sad and shy and she's not seeing her friends anymore who are still studying far from her city.She doesn't have a good relationship with her mother.They never talk.Never show afection.And her stepfather is unemployed.She also have 2 little sister.She didn't like her life.Not until the day she met a girl who would become her best friend and the only person who has ever undertood her completely.But her friend has a fatal desease...
Jessica Liscano da Luz, Novo Hamburgo, Rio Grande do Sul - Brasil
is good for someone
samuel, lagos, nigeria
Shrek! an example in good screenwriting. You got to be kidding me.....
Ann, New York , USA